GenesisNemesis
I am a proud hedonist.
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- Jul 24, 2006
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- Secular Humanist, Scientific Skepticism, Strong Atheism
It would scan better if "sans" were replaced by "without". Why the everlasting FUCK did he use the word "sans"??
My granny could write better poetry than that.
And she's dead.
Lulz. “Without” would also have preserved some vestige of meter …It would scan better if "sans" were replaced by "without". Why the everlasting FUCK did he use the word "sans"??
My granny could write better poetry than that.
And she's dead.
It’s pretty clear the “author” doesn’t know what you mean by “meter”.Lulz. “Without” would also have preserved some vestige of meter …It would scan better if "sans" were replaced by "without". Why the everlasting FUCK did he use the word "sans"??
My granny could write better poetry than that.
And she's dead.
Maybe the “author” was trying to avoid that.
So it’s clunky. Elon’s art is to poetry what stoneware is to pottery.It’s pretty clear the “author” doesn’t know what you mean by “meter”.
FTFY.Elon’s art is to poetry whatstonewaresledgehammer is to pottery.
Yo, no need to insult stoneware like that. Stoneware is actually nice, functional, and useful, unlike Elongated Muskrat.So it’s clunky. Elon’s art is to poetry what stoneware is to pottery.It’s pretty clear the “author” doesn’t know what you mean by “meter”.
(/weekend exceptional generosity)
I believe it; my sister is a potter (and multimedia artist) and she makes some cool stuff.My dead husband was a potter. Stoneware he made was beautiful.
I did not realise that morons had a ranking. I thought it was just the single level of moronic.
Syllables. 8 per line. It reads like crap still.It would scan better if "sans" were replaced by "without". Why the everlasting FUCK did he use the word "sans"??