KeepTalking
Code Monkey
- Joined
- Jan 15, 2010
- Messages
- 4,641
- Location
- St. Louis Metro East
- Basic Beliefs
- Atheist, Secular Humanist, Pastifarian, IPUnitard
Regardless, the statement refers to an issue that occurred as she was leaving office, so revoking her security clearance would have had no effect, she was already out the door.
That statement is calling out the minimum remedy she could have taken -
To avoid the violation of their policy, which may or may not have also been a violation of the Federal Record Keeping act. The violation did not occur until she failed to do that.
the violation happened when she was in her appointment as SecState.
Show your work. What was the violation, and what policy of the State Department, or provision of the Federal Record Keeping act did it violate?
Reading that as something which happened after she was out of the position defies standard English.
Hardly. It was a fairly straightforward statement in standard English.
"At a minimum, Secretary Clinton should have surrendered all emails dealing with Department business before leaving government service and," - This is the first part of the sentence, it tells us what she did not do that she should have done.
"because she did not do so," - The word "because" notes that what happened in the first part of the sentence (failure to surrender all emails) is the cause of what is about to be stated next.
"she did not comply with the Department's policies that were implemented in accordance with the Federal Records Act." - Now we finally come to what her action (or inaction) noted at the beginning of the sentence caused, namely non-compliance with policy.