Keith&Co.
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So, what's going on at your place?
But don't describe it as 'the cat is...,' or 'my toddler just...' or 'my 83-year-old mother wants...' Rather, use the subject line with their actions.
The drunk guy at the end of the bar is wearing a cone so he won't chew on the stitches in his stomach.
Or,
The drunk guy at the end of the bar is crying because his sister ate the crayon HE was going to eat.
But don't describe it as 'the cat is...,' or 'my toddler just...' or 'my 83-year-old mother wants...' Rather, use the subject line with their actions.
The drunk guy at the end of the bar is wearing a cone so he won't chew on the stitches in his stomach.
Or,
The drunk guy at the end of the bar is crying because his sister ate the crayon HE was going to eat.