Obviously, assessing habitat and biodiversity loss, human impact on ecosystems, etc, is the goal:
That may be obvious to you, but to me it sounds like handwavium.
Assessing what about habitat and biodiversity loss? An assessment needs a framework or protocol. What is that protocol? What kinds of, and degrees of, habitat loss are acceptable? What kinds and degrees of biodiversity loss?
Which human impacts on ecosystems are being assessed, and for what specifically? What's hiding in your 'etc'?
Abstract
Environments on Earth are always changing, and living systems evolve within them. For most of their history, human beings did the same.
and they still do.
But in the last two centuries, humans have become the planet’s dominant species, changing and often degrading Earth’s environments and living systems, including human cultures, in unprecedented ways.
Nice assertion. Where's the detail? What, exactly, is unprecedented here?
Contemporary worldviews that have severed ancient connections between people and the environments that shaped us – plus our consumption and population growth – deepened this degradation.
That sounds like a religious, not a scientific claim. Have 'ancient connections' been severed? How? And why is that bad, rather than neutral or good? For whom or what is it bad? Is it good for someone or something else, and how do you pick who should or shouldn't benefit or suffer?
Understanding, measuring, and managing today’s human environmental impacts – the most important consequence of which is the impoverishment of living systems – is humanity’s greatest challenge for the 21st century.
The cart is before the horse. Are living systems 'impoverished'? By what standard was this determined?
"Obviously" is not the appropriate word here. None of this is obvious; it's just assumed to be true without explanation, reason, or justification for assuming it.